Thursday, February 10, 2011

First kiss…..

The first time I kiss you I want you to be standing up. I want to press the length of my body to yours. I want to feel the goose bumps rise as I run my nails through the hair on your arms. I want to watch your head loll back when I breathe on your neck. I want to feel your heart pound; I want to see your veins pulse. I want to trace a trail from the hollow of your neck to the corner of your mouth with the tip of my tongue. I want to slide past your teeth and hear you moan when my tongue touches yours. I want to make you into a puddle. Then I want to lap you up.


First time, last time and all the times in between.

45 comments:

Monica Marier said...

VERY hot. Hope your Valentine's day includes much of the same.

Karen from Mentor said...

thanks mon.

*hands you a chocolate*

John Wiswell said...

Putting a lot of pressure on yourself there, especially when some of us aren't very drippy men.

estrella05azul said...

Now that's a hot demand I'm sure not many could say 'No.' to trying to live up to. I love how your sensual words come alive ;)

Karen from Mentor said...

thanks Estrella,

*hands you a "be mine" pink candy heart*

Karen from Mentor said...

Well john, my advice is drink a lot of water and lift with your legs.

*hands you a card with a picture of a kitten in a boot on it*

flyingscribbler said...

You don't get this in a Hallmark Valentines card! Shame.

Karen from Mentor said...

Look in the back row of cards behind the ones that have monkeys dressed like cupid. There's a tiny little division of the shoebox Hallmark cards marked "stiletto" --they're a lot like this.

Alan W. Davidson said...

I was a tad chilled from being out on snow clearing this morning...problem solved. Warmed up nicely, thank you very much. That was very sexy #fridayflash, miss. Happy Valentines to you *passes Karen some catnip to feed to the flying monkeys*

Karen from Mentor said...

Great to know that I helped cut down on your heating bill Alan. I'm all about conservation. Speaking of which, I think I'll conserve the catnip for a day when the boys aren't already wound up on cold medicine.

*hands you a lindor truffle*

Harry said...

Looks like this could take a spell. Pucker up!

Karen from Mentor said...

Well you know what they say Harry, "anything worth doing..."

Deanna Schrayer said...

YUM! What a kiss this is Karen, I'm sweating here! ;)

harmzie said...

Whoa.
I like boys, but am seriously considering letting you try this out on me. I'm glad I'm *not* a boy, so I don't have to wait to stand up & walk away.

Karen from Mentor said...

It's almost lunchtime harmzie, you could see what the husband's doing right about now...

*hands you a sweet little musical love bug to squeeze til then*

Karen from Mentor said...

Thanks Deanna. I got a lot of emails about this one...laughing...

*hugs you, gives you a red silk hanky*

Emma Newman said...

Oh my... that's powerful. And my husband is away. Damn.

fictdoodles said...

uh huh...*wipes drool from chin*

Gracie said...

Purrrr...

Hope your Valentine's day is full of all this steaminess. Poor guy won't know what hit him, lucky fool. Hehehe.

Good one, Miss Karen. :)

Karen from Mentor said...

Thanks Gracie.
*grins at you and hands you a slice of red velvet cake*

Karen from Mentor said...

Follow that drooling up with plenty of fluids David. It's cold and flu season, we wouldn't want you to get dehydrated.

Thanks for stopping in.
:0)

Karen from Mentor said...

Well Em, if it were me I'd go outside and roll in the snow. But my neighbors are used to stuff like that. Don't know how that would go over in your neck of the woods.

*wishes your hubby a speedy journey home*

Happy Valentine's day sweetp

Seleste said...

Mmmmm... to be kissed like that again for the first time. *Swoons*

Laura Eno said...

Very hot, Karen...*fanning myself*
Now, you know me...I was waiting for the other Karen to surface - the one with the fangs and the REALLY long tongue.

*smooches you and hands you peppermint candy for your monkeys*

Karen from Mentor said...

Ah, a little tip for you Laura...if it's tagged "romance" nobody's gonna die horribly. I was gonna say that nobody was gonna die, but in Avast my heart somebody does die...but in my defense, she doesn't die horribly.

My monkeys thank you for the mint. And I'm always happy to get a smooch from you.
*happy sigh*

Karen from Mentor said...

*shoves a fainting couch under Seleste just in the nick of time*

Raven Corinn Carluk said...

Intense. Just perfect

Karen from Mentor said...

Why thank you m'lady.

*hands you a whitman's sampler*

ganymeder said...

Wow, that was incredible. *heads off for a cold shower*

Al Bruno III said...

Lovely... and naughty... and all the stops along the way...

Karen from Mentor said...

Santa keeps me on both lists Al.

Karen from Mentor said...

giggles at Cathy. Ok, I'll just put this bowl of candy message hearts here on the counter. You can get them when you're done.

Mari said...

Well, that's a hot piece of fiction. *gulps*
Fantastic, Karen, you never disappoint!

Tony Noland said...

Wow. Obviously, "Happy Valentine's Day" is more a statement of fact than an expression of hope.

KjM said...

Is it hot in here? Or is it just me? Nope. It's definitely *you*!

Yike, and that's just the FIRST kiss. Oh my.

Happy Valentine's Day to you, Karen.

Laurita said...

Yowza! That was...steamy. And for some reason it makes me think of chocolate ice cream.

Cathy Webster (Olliffe) said...

The first paragraph is so hot (SO hot!) but then the last sentence is wistful and hopeful and sweet. To have a lifelong lust for the one you love is what we all aspire to. Happy V-Day, Karen!

bsain said...

Oh. My. God.
Cold shower... meet Becky.
I think I will have the next cute man who steps in to my life read this... I'll determine the possibility of a second date on his reaction. ;-)

j said...

So late getting here, but WOW. This is beautiful.

Cinderita said...

Wow! WOW! (Follower #100)

terrepruitt said...

Oooooooo!

Cat Connor said...

Oh my. Just... oh my. :D

Karen from Mentor said...

Thanks for stopping in everybody. I was offline for a bit. Coming back to all of your comments made my morning.

*BIG smile!*

XM said...

[tugs at collar] So uh, Karen. You write "those" kind of books? Lap me up? Oh, mercy on me babe.

Karen from Mentor said...

*laughing* hard to imagine that I could discomfit a vampire. But makes me gleeful all the same.

thanks for stopping in doll.
:0)